what would i change?
the intro synth the deadmau5ish sound, add some riser before drop and probably the main synth when it drops... it sounds too amateurish to me.. unless your going for that kind of sound?
what i like?
the mixdown is great, the bass is strong, melody is good anyways the idea is great but i would work more on that.
and i checked more of your songs... u have great mixdown skills